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FORERUNNER COMPENDIUM: THE WHITE DEMON

The squat, ugly Kigyar drop ship dropped from slip space, its dark grey form blasting into the thick atmosphere of a blue ocean and continent covered world. Its hull superheated as it flew at supersonic speed into the heavy atmosphere, its form resembling a falling star.

Its pilot doubled over in his seat, clutching at his chest. He couldn't breathe. The stolen Kigyar ship pitched in the air, responding to his loss of concentration. The ship's co pilot glanced across at him.

"Astorian!" she exclaimed. "What's wrong?"

The black armoured figure seated in the pilot's seat was too tall – it was conf

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~ravenmcallister Mar 25, 2011 Professional Writer

But that's definitely new to me. Cool!

~makariytakael92 Mar 25, 2011 Student General Artist

thank you!

~Nrekkvan Mar 25, 2011

Much more interesting shapes man. I like the colors, it looks dusty / dirty. I'm sick of sterile clean environments in sci-fi.

I like the design of body armor and helmet quite a lot. I dont quite like the rifle being exactly horizontal, makes it look staged / cheesy / whatever. Up if she's aiming at something that's up there or down if she's walking somewhere.

The forearm should be straight (as is the bones underneath it) - it's bent in a weird way now. I know it's the hand connecting but it still looks weird.

Oh and I assumed she under the armor, is it? I like the hanging piece of hair / cloth and how it's catching a different light and seems transparent, little details like that really make a painting better. Also the background works better than ANY gradient, good job with that ^_-

~makariytakael92 Mar 25, 2011 Student General Artist

thank you, I def agree about the arm being awkward, and the horizontal gun is no good. thanks for these critiques!

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